diff --git a/content/sundries/jocalsend/index.md b/content/sundries/jocalsend/index.md
index b5fb707..954ff84 100644
--- a/content/sundries/jocalsend/index.md
+++ b/content/sundries/jocalsend/index.md
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 title = "Jocalsend: actually useful software if you're a weirdo like me"
 slug = "jocalsend"
 date = "2025-08-22"
-updated = "2025-08-22"
+updated = "2025-08-23"
 [taxonomies]
 tags = ["software", "sundry", "proclamation", "localfirst", "useful", "p2p"]
 +++
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ tags = ["software", "sundry", "proclamation", "localfirst", "useful", "p2p"]
 
 Recently, I released a program called
 [`jocalsend`](https://git.kittencollective.com/nebkor/joecalsend), which is a play on
-"[LocalSend](https://localsend.org/)". LocalSend is, in its own words, " a free,
+"[LocalSend](https://localsend.org/)". LocalSend is, in its own words, "a free,
 open-source app that allows you to securely share files and messages with nearby devices over your
 local network without needing an internet connection." You can think of it as a sort of "we have
 [AirDrop](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AirDrop) at home", where "home" is non-Apple devices and
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ so if you have Rust installed, just run,
 cargo install jocalsend
 ```
 
-which will install the `jocalsend` program to `$HOME/.cargo/bin`; add that directory to you `$PATH`
+which will install the `jocalsend` program to `$HOME/.cargo/bin`; add that directory to your `$PATH`
 and then you can run `jocalsend` from the command line:
 
 ```
@@ -150,11 +150,11 @@ then `enter` to send, and you can see a preview on the mobile device:
 
 ![receiving text on the mobile app](./receiving_text_on_phone.png)
 
-And that's all pretty much there is!
+And that's pretty much all there is!
 
 ## Wrapping up
 
-Anyway, it's been pretty fun making jocalsend. I now use it daily, and every time I do, I'm pretty
+Anyway, I've had fun making jocalsend. I now use it daily, and every time I do, I'm pretty
 darned pleased with myself. If you're a weirdo like me who doesn't use Apple stuff, maybe this would
 be useful for you, too.
 
@@ -166,6 +166,6 @@ be useful for you, too.
 
 [^cargo]: I honestly don't really get the naming theme with Rust, cargo, and crates; are crates typically rusty? I usually think of them as being made of wood.
 
-[^nixpkgs]: I wasn't the one who added to to nixpkgs; a total stranger who is a nixpkgs maintainer saw that it had been featured
+[^nixpkgs]: I wasn't the one who added it to nixpkgs; a total stranger who is a nixpkgs maintainer saw that it had been featured
     as the ["terminal tool of the week"](https://terminaltrove.com/jocalsend/) on a site called
     Terminal Trove, thought it was neat, and [added it](https://github.com/NixOS/nixpkgs/pull/435106).